之前我們總說(shuō)雅思寫作如何提分？雅思寫作的高分技巧。除此之外我們也要了解一些雅思寫作的丟分事項(xiàng)，避免踩坑。下面小編分享給大家一些雅思寫作丟分的失敗的開頭案例匯總盤點(diǎn)。希望可以幫到正在備考雅思的同學(xué)。

開頭一：過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單，沒(méi)有重點(diǎn)

典型失敗案例：

Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

開頭二：中式英文，人見人暈

典型失敗案例：

Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life.

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

開頭三：廢話連篇不知所云

典型失敗案例：

Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

修改方案：開門見山，直奔主題

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

開頭四：觀點(diǎn)模糊，態(tài)度曖昧

典型失敗案例：

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

開頭五：偏離主題，無(wú)軌電車

典型失敗案例：

Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

開頭六：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，慘不忍睹

典型失敗案例：

Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

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