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Almost everyone wants to pursue a life path strewn with roses,whereas the truth is that the real life is always full of twists and turns.This,accordingly,provokes the endless debate on how to face difficulties of

our lives.

Some shiftless people choose to adapt themselves to the tough situations of their lives rather than struggle,naively believing that misfortunes might somehow disappear or they are able to successfully adjust themselves to difficulties that others are trying their best to go through.Once they get a job without any satisfaction,for example,they do have the illusion that one day they can suddenly become extremely passionate about the

job and all the dissatisfaction they used to have will be totally gone.Obviously,they ought to walk out of the

fairy tale world they mistakenly believe they are living in but actually does not exist at all.

On the other hand,people with a positive outlook on life are more likely to actively forge ahead with the

hardship they are facing.In most cases,they make every effort to overcome the barrier between real life and

the life they dream of.In a financial predicament,for instance,they unquestionably exert themselves to the

utmost to borrow money from their friends,apply for loan from banks,or work unbelievably hard to make

enough money.Beyond all doubt,they will remove their obstacles step by step.On top of this,what they can

learn and accumulate from this process can be definitely seen as the priceless life experiences.

In conclusion,we should certainly be the masters of our own destiny but not give up ourselves or be defeated

by any difficulty of life.

一參考澤文

幾乎每個人都想要追求安逸的生活,然而事實是真實的人生總是充滿了各種挫折。這也就引起了一場永無止境的討論:我們應(yīng)該如何面對生活中的艱難困苦。

不求上進的人選擇去適應(yīng)這些生活中的困境而不是為之奮斗。 他們天真地認為這些不幸可能會莫名地消失,或者認為他們最終可以成功地調(diào)整自己來適應(yīng)這些別人需要竭盡全力才能克服的困難。例如,雖然他們非常不滿意自己的工作,但他們?nèi)匀恍拇婊孟?某一天他們可以突然變得對這個工

作充滿激情,那時對工作所有的不滿都將煙消云微.顯然,他們應(yīng)該走出那個自以為生活在其中卻 根本不存在的童話世界。

另一方面,擁有積極人生觀的人們更愿意在他們面臨困境砥礪前行.在大多數(shù)情況下

他們會盡其所能去克服橫亙于現(xiàn)實和他們夢想生活之間的障得.例如,一旦處于財務(wù)危機中,毋庸置疑他們會使出渾身解數(shù)去向友人借錢,向銀行申請貸款,或極其努力地工作賺取足夠的錢毫無疑問,他們會一步步地擺脫困境。除此之外,在這個過程中他們所字習和積累的東西絕對可以被視為寶貴的人生經(jīng)驗。

總之,我們當然應(yīng)該成為主宰自己命運的主人,而不是自我放棄或者被生活困境所擊敗。

結(jié)構(gòu)分析與點評

由于題目是雙邊討論”類題目,因此本文采用較為常見的四段式結(jié)構(gòu)。開頭段介紹背景并點明題目。主一段和主二段分別就題干中的兩個觀點展開論述,并且通過分析這兩個觀點,筆者的

傾向性也一目了然地表現(xiàn)了出來。結(jié)尾段通過主段的論述自然而然地得出結(jié)論,即筆者自身的立場回應(yīng)題干主體。

亮點詞匯與表達

life path 生命之路,生命之旅

twists and turns迂回曲折

provoke.引起

shiftless adj.不求上進的

misfortune n.不幸

illusion n.錯覺,幻覺

dissatisfaction n.不滿

mistakenly錯誤地,曲解地

forge ahead 砥礪前行

predicament n.困境,窘?jīng)r

exert oneself to the utmost 盡某人最大努力 beyond all doubt毫無疑問

亮點語句

1.Some shiftless people choose to adapt themselves to the tough situations of their lives rather th

struggle,naively believing that misfortunes might somehow disappear or they are able to successiun

adjust themselves to difficulties that others are trying their best to go through.(第二段第一句)

不求上進的人選擇去適應(yīng)這些生活中的困境而不是為之奮斗他們天真地認為這些不幸可能會莫名地消失,或者認為他們最終可以成功地調(diào)整自己來適應(yīng)這些別人需要竭盡全力才能克服的困難

2.Obviously,they ought to walk out of the fairy tale world they mistakenly believe they are living actually does not exist at all.(第二段最后一句)

顯然,他們應(yīng)該走出那個自以為生活在其中卻根本不存在的童話世界。

3.On the other hand,people with a positive outlook on life are more likely to actively forge ahead with the hardship they are facing.(第三段第一句)

另一方面,擁有積極人生觀的人們更愿意在他們面臨困境時砥礪前行。

4.In conclusion,we should certainly be the masters of our own destiny but not give up ourselves or be defeated by any difficulty of life.(最后一段)

總之,我們當然應(yīng)該成為主宰自己命運的主人,而不是自我放棄或者被生活的困境所擊敗。

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