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演講正文來源:
https://www.ted.com/talks/bill_gates_the_next_outbreak_we_re_not_ready/transcript
2015年,Bill Gates就傳染病的問題進行了演講。
在全球疫情肆虐的今天,演講的內(nèi)容仍發(fā)人深省。
以下是演講部分正文,大家學習一下搭配和表達
【冠狀病毒圖片】
If anything kills over 10 million people in the next few decades, it's most likely to be a highly infectious virus rather than a war. Not missiles, but microbes. Now, part of the reason for this is that we've invested a huge amount in nuclear deterrents. But we've actually invested very little in a system to stop an epidemic. We're not ready for the next epidemic.
a highly infectious virus 高傳染性病毒
nuclear deterrents 核威懾
stop an epidemic 組織流行病
【Ebola病毒感染人圖片】
Let's look at Ebola. I'm sure all of you read about it in the newspaper, lots of tough challenges. I followed it carefully through the case analysis tools we use to track polio eradication. And as you look at what went on, the problem wasn't that there was a system that didn't work well enough, the problem was that we didn't have a system at all. In fact, there's some pretty obvious key missing pieces.
case analysis tools 案例分析工具
key missing pieces 關鍵缺失的部分
【醫(yī)療資源不足圖片】
We didn't have a group of epidemiologists ready to go, who would have gone, seen what the disease was, seen how far it had spread. The case reports came in on paper. It was very delayed before they were put online and they were extremely inaccurate. We didn't have a medical team ready to go. We didn't have a way of preparing people. Now, Médecins Sans Frontières did a great job orchestrating volunteers. But even so, we were far slower than we should have been getting the thousands of workers into these countries. And a large epidemic would require us to have hundreds of thousands of workers. There was no one there to look at treatment approaches. No one to look at the diagnostics. No one to figure out what tools should be used. As an example, we could have taken the blood of survivors, processed it, and put that plasma back in people to protect them. But that was never tried.
Epidemiologists 流行病學家
extremely inaccurate 極其不準確
job orchestrating volunteers 協(xié)調工作的志愿者
treatment approaches 治療方法
figure out 弄清楚
【“西班牙流感”圖片】
So next time, we might not be so lucky. You can have a virus where people feel well enough while they're infectious that they get on a plane or they go to a market. The source of the virus could be a natural epidemic like Ebola, or it could be bioterrorism. So there are things that would literally make things a thousand times worse. In fact, let's look at a model of a virus spread through the air, like the Spanish Flu back in 1918. So here's what would happen: It would spread throughout the world very, very quickly. And you can see over 30 million people died from that epidemic. So this is a serious problem. We should be concerned.
natural epidemic 自然流行
spread through the air 空氣傳播
serious problem 嚴重的問題
【科技進步圖片】
But in fact, we can build a really good response system. We have the benefits of all the science and technology that we talk about here. We've got cell phones to get information from the public and get information out to them. We have satellite maps where we can see where people are and where they're moving. We have advances in biology that should dramatically change the turnaround time to look at a pathogen and be able to make drugs and vaccines that fit for that pathogen. So we can have tools, but those tools need to be put into an overall global health system. And we need preparedness.
good response system 良好的反應系統(tǒng)
satellite maps 衛(wèi)星地圖
overall global health system 整體全球衛(wèi)生系統(tǒng)
need preparedness 需要準備
【貧困地區(qū)圖片】
What are the key pieces? First, we need strong health systems in poor countries. That's where mothers can give birth safely, kids can get all their vaccines. But, also where we'll see the outbreak very early on. We need a medical reserve corps: lots of people who've got the training and background who are ready to go, with the expertise. And then we need to pair those medical people with the military, taking advantage of the military's ability to move fast, do logistics and secure areas. We need to do simulations, germ games, not war games, so that we see where the holes are. The last time a germ game was done in the United States was back in 2001, and it didn't go so well. So far the score is germs: 1, people: 0. Finally, we need lots of advanced research and development in areas of vaccines and diagnostics. There are some big breakthroughs, like the Adeno-associated virus, that could work very, very quickly.
give birth safely 安全分娩
medical reserve corps 醫(yī)療后備隊
take advantage of 利用
do logistics 做物流
advanced research and development in areas of 在…領域的先進研發(fā)
big breakthroughs 大突破
【警鐘圖片】
Now I don't have an exact budget for what this would cost, but I'm quite sure it's very modest compared to the potential harm. The World Bank estimates that if we have a worldwide flu epidemic, global wealth will go down by over three trillion dollars and we'd have millions and millions of deaths. These investments offer significant benefits beyond just being ready for the epidemic. The primary healthcare, the research and development, those things would reduce global health equity and make the world more just as well as safer. So I think this should absolutely be a priority. There's no need to panic. We don't have to hoard cans of spaghetti or go down into the basement. But we need to get going, because time is not on our side. In fact, if there's one positive thing that can come out of the Ebola epidemic, it's that it can serve as an early warning, a wake-up call, to get ready. If we start now, we can be ready for the next epidemic.
potential harm 潛在危害
worldwide flu epidemic 全球流感流行
offer significant benefits 提供重大好處
primary healthcare 基本保健
There's no need to panic. 不必驚慌
hoard cans of spaghetti 囤積罐裝意面
serve as an early warning 作為預警
wake-up call 警鐘
詳細內(nèi)容請訪問:
https://www.ted.com/talks/bill_gates_the_next_outbreak_we_re_not_ready/transcript
環(huán)球雅思秉持教育成就未來的理念,專注于為中國學子提供優(yōu)質的出國語言培訓及配套服務。環(huán)球雅思在教學中采用“九步閉環(huán)法”,幫助學生快速提升學習效能,同時提供優(yōu)質的課后服務,跟進學生學習進程,為優(yōu)質教學提供堅強的保障。目前,環(huán)球雅思東莞學校已構建了包含語言培訓、出國咨詢、國際課程、游學考察、在線課程等在內(nèi)的一站式服務教育生態(tài)圈。相關問題可在線免費咨詢http://10000hz.net.cn/,或撥打免費熱線0769-21682008~
]]>對于想報名雅思線上培訓的學生來說,選一家性價比高的培訓機構是重中之重,那這么多的大小品牌機構,到底挑選哪家好呢?要是你是首次接觸線上雅思培訓機構,我建議從它們的教學體系、師資團隊、輔導效果、服務態(tài)度、機構規(guī)模等不同角度來綜合比對,包括線上和面授課程的區(qū)別也要清楚,且可以結合自身需要,優(yōu)先考慮現(xiàn)階段市面上口碑比較好的機構。
雅思培訓價錢標準影響要素-學習方式
雅思輔導價錢多少錢與學生選的授課方式同樣有明顯的關聯(lián)。不同的上課方式,一樣的課程階段,價錢也不相同。當下雅思輔導學校就是去學校面對面上課與線上直播上課兩種方式。幾乎雅思班課面對面上課價錢相比線上直播輔導要貴許多。VIP一對一輔導價錢還得看雅思輔導學校,有些輔導學校線上直播VIP一對一輔導價錢與實體VIP一對一輔導沒有什么不同。某些輔導學校線上直播VIP一對一會比實體VIP一對一輔導便宜20%-25%左右。
去封閉輔導機構學雅思有這些優(yōu)勢
外語基礎弱可以上雅思全封閉班嗎?考雅思究竟要不要上全封閉班?眼下有哪些值得推薦的雅思封閉班?相信這些都是許多同學在決定報名雅思封閉班后將會面臨的一系列問題。因為咱們都清楚,現(xiàn)在的雅思學習機構特別多,提供的封閉班種類也特別多元化。那在拿定主意之前,咱們不光要清楚不同雅思封閉班的適合對象、與普通班相比的優(yōu)勢,還要學會如何依照自己的真實狀況來篩選高性價比的雅思封閉班,只有這樣才能一舉得勝。
把握重點才能挑到適合的在線雅思一對一私教課
哪個雅思培訓學校的在線1對1私教課比較不錯?相信不少的雅思考生在報網(wǎng)絡課之前都會拿1對1私教課和普通班來做對比,畢竟1對1私教課的優(yōu)勢太明顯了,只是學費確實高一些。那咱們要如何來挑選呢?其實對比在線雅思1對1私教課的關鍵就在于評估它的師資安排是否專業(yè)、授課模式是否先進、提分效果是否突出、服務類別是否貼心、教材課本是否適合等等,且這些要素必須綜合地去考量,單純對比某一個的意義并不大,畢竟眼下沒有哪個機構的在線1對1私教課是100%好評的。
]]>Whatmakesagoodlife?
演講者:RobertValdinger
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演講正文來源: https://www.ted.com/talks/robert_waldinger_what_makes_a_good_life_lessons_from_the_longest_study_on_happiness
What keeps us healthy and happy as we go through life? If you were going to invest now in your future best self, where would you put your time and your energy? There was a recent survey of millennials asking them what their most important life goals were, and over 80 percent said that a major life goal for them was to get rich. And another 50 percent of those same young adults said that another major life goal was to become famous.
在我們的人生中 是什么讓我們保持健康且幸福呢? 如果現(xiàn)在你可以 為未來的自己投資 你會把時間和精力投資在哪里呢? 最近在千禧一代中有這么一個調查 問他們生活中最重要的目標是什么 超過80%的人說 最大的生活目標就是要有錢 還有50%的年輕人說 另一個重要的生活目標 就是要出名
And we're constantly told to lean in to work, to push harder and achieve more. We're given the impression that these are the things that we need to go after in order to have a good life. Pictures of entire lives, of the choices that people make and how those choices work out for them, those pictures are almost impossible to get. Most of what we know about human life we know from asking people to remember the past, and as we know, hindsight is anything but 20/20. We forget vast amounts of what happens to us in life, and sometimes memory is downright creative.
而且我們總是被灌輸 要投入工作,要加倍努力 要成就更多。 我們被灌輸了這樣一種觀念, 只有做到剛才說的這些 才能有好日子過。 要人們縱觀整個人生, 想象各種選擇, 以及這些選擇最終導致的結果, 幾乎是不可能的。 關于人的一生,我們能了解到的, 大部分都是通過人的回憶得來, 但眾所周知,大部分都是事后諸葛。 一生中,我們會忘記很多發(fā)生過的事情, 而且記憶常常不可靠。
But what if we could watch entire lives as they unfold through time? What if we could study people from the time that they were teenagers all the way into old age to see what really keeps people happy and healthy?
但如果我們可以從頭到尾地 縱觀人的一生呢? 如果我們可以跟蹤研究一個人, 從他少年時代開始 一直到他步入晚年, 看看究竟是什么讓人們 保持快樂和健康呢?
We did that. The Harvard Study of Adult Development may be the longest study of adult life that's ever been done. For 75 years, we've tracked the lives of 724 men, year after year, asking about their work, their home lives, their health, and of course asking all along the way without knowing how their life stories were going to turn out.
我們做到了。 哈佛大學(進行的)這項 關于成人發(fā)展的研究, 可能是同類研究中耗時最長的。 在75年時間里, 我們跟蹤了724個人的一生, 年復一年,了解他們的工作、 家庭生活、健康狀況, 當然,在這一過程中, 我們完全不知道他們的人生 將走向何方。
……
We've learned three big lessons about relationships. The first is that social connections are really good for us, and that loneliness kills. It turns out that people who are more socially connected to family, to friends, to community, are happier, they're physically healthier, and they live longer than people who are less well connected. And the experience of loneliness turns out to be toxic. People who are more isolated than they want to be from others find that they are less happy, their health declines earlier in midlife, their brain functioning declines sooner and they live shorter lives than people who are not lonely. And the sad fact is that at any given time, more than one in five Americans will report that they're lonely.
關于人際關系,我們得到三大結論。 第一,社會關系對我們是有益的, 而孤獨寂寞有害健康。 我們發(fā)現(xiàn),那些跟家庭成員更親近的人, 更愛與朋友、與鄰居交往的人, 會比那些不善交際、離群索居的人, 更快樂,更健康,更長壽。 孤獨寂寞是有害健康的。 那些“被孤立”的人, 跟不孤單的人相比, 往往更加不快樂, 等他們?nèi)说街心陼r,健康狀況下降更快, 大腦功能下降得更快, 也沒那么長壽。 可惜的是,長久以來, 每5個美國人中就至少 有1個聲稱自己是孤獨的。
環(huán)球雅思秉持教育成就未來的理念,專注于為中國學子提供優(yōu)質的出國語言培訓及配套服務。環(huán)球雅思在教學中采用“九步閉環(huán)法”,幫助學生快速提升學習效能,同時提供優(yōu)質的課后服務,跟進學生學習進程,為優(yōu)質教學提供堅強的保障。目前,環(huán)球雅思東莞學校已構建了包含語言培訓、出國咨詢、國際課程、游學考察、在線課程等在內(nèi)的一站式服務教育生態(tài)圈。相關問題可在線免費咨詢http://10000hz.net.cn/,或撥打免費熱線0769-21682008~
]]>一對一的雅思托福培訓,能夠賦予掌握重要技巧和方法的高效性。 只要你遵循老師的教導,有正確的心態(tài)和態(tài)度,相信你一定可以在短時間內(nèi)輕松過關。下面小編為大家分享雅思托福一對一價格,歡迎大家閱讀。
一、雅思一對一價格
1、雅思一對一在線班:(基礎成績5分到目標分數(shù)6分),預計30課時起,收費在15000元左右,平均單課時550元左右;
2、雅思一對一面授班:(基礎成績5分到目標分數(shù)6分),預計30課時起,收費在17000元左右,平均單課時550元左右;
3、雅思一對一在線班:(基礎成績4分到目標分數(shù)6分),預計60課時起,收費在22000元左右,平均單課時550元左右;
4、雅思一對一面授班:(基礎成績5分到目標分數(shù)6.5分),預計54課時起,收費在33000元左右,平均單課時610元左右。
二、托福一對一價格
1、線上網(wǎng)課托福一對一培訓課程,一般費用會在一課時350-500元左右,能夠隨時根據(jù)自己時間上課,上課地點也不受限制。適合平時學習時間不固定的學員;
2、線下面授托福一對一培訓課程,價格成本會有所提升,一般托福一對一培訓價格會在一課時800元左右,與老師面對面溝通,疑難問題解決更有效率,適合基礎比較薄弱、備考時間不足的學員。
三、適用學員
1、托福成績偏科嚴重者,需要單科提高的學員
2、學習時間較為緊張
3、上過課,參加過多次托??荚?/p>
4、基礎薄弱,需要從零基礎開始學習的學員
5、低齡留學生
6、單項有要求者
7、班課時間不合適者
]]>雅思作文班是怎么收費的?雅思培訓的周期是根據(jù)學員的基礎和目標分數(shù),以及上課的頻次來進行排課的。課程決定以后價格便差不多出來了。這個也要看學習的環(huán)境,例如:老師、接受能力、頻次、班型等。如果快速提升一般建議一對一或者一對二,一對三的小班課。如果考慮經(jīng)濟因素,那上在線課程或者大班課,便宜點。如果時間條件允許,選擇封閉式培訓,可能時間比較長,但是效果性比價好。我們這邊很多學員都感覺封閉式培訓效果好。一般的一個培訓周期能提升1分,大概需要1-2個月左右的時間,以此類推吧。學習的費用,主要是根據(jù)具體報名的課時數(shù),或者固定的培訓班決定的,如果選擇名師了,這個價格可能比較貴,沒有名師的會相對便宜點,當然也需要考慮地區(qū)因素,一線城市高一點,二三線城市略微偏低。這個主要是看看學員所在的位置等。
雅思寫作失分點包含哪些?主要有以下幾點:
一、句子結構過于冗長
在教學過程中,大時間會覺得有的考生想要追求文章的華麗感和書面化,通常把眾多從句和復雜句拼裝在一起,是變成一個與其復雜壯麗的組裝產(chǎn)品,若考生有很強的邏輯性與英文能力,可以句子的正確性,如此做的結果是逼迫讀者一口氣讀完五六行的句子以至憋氣過長而亡,但是若考生的英文能力再相對差些,這樣的大句子里有一定量的語法錯誤,那結果便是悲劇了!
二、基本句子結構錯誤
簡單句有2個基本成分,其中主語與謂語是組成所有書面英文表達的基本元素,此為每一個學習英文的考生都必須要掌握的常識,但大時常會覺得,把簡單句放到從句或復雜句中時,句式的不完整(一般表現(xiàn)成主語或動詞缺失)和句子成分的多余(一般表現(xiàn)為多個動詞簡單機械的連用)這類錯誤成了考生文章中的常便飯。
我們在找雅思培訓班的時候無非是看重兩點,一是效果好,二是費用不貴。那么如何找到符合這兩點的雅思培訓班呢,這需要我們對此多做一些了解。一般來說雅思培訓班主要也分為兩類,在線學習和線下學習,兩者在學習方式上也各有特點,同樣在費用上也存在不小的差異。
以上是小編分享的雅思作文班是怎么收費的全部內(nèi)容。
希望以上內(nèi)容能否對您有些許幫助,如有雅思托福備考相關問題可以在線咨詢環(huán)球雅思老師,看見后第一時間為同學們解答疑問。環(huán)球雅思秉持教育成就未來的理念,專注于為中國學子提供優(yōu)質的出國語言培訓及配套服務。環(huán)球雅思在教學中采用“九步閉環(huán)法”,幫助學生快速提升學習效能,同時提供優(yōu)質的課后服務,跟進學生學習進程,為優(yōu)質教學提供堅強的保障。目前,環(huán)球雅思東莞學校已構建了包含語言培訓、出國咨詢、國際課程、游學考察、在線課程等在內(nèi)的一站式服務教育生態(tài)圈。相關問題可在線免費咨詢,或撥打免費熱線0769-21682008~
]]>誤區(qū)1:寫夠字數(shù)很重要,字數(shù)越多,分數(shù)越高
事實:字數(shù)是雅思寫作要求之一,但是這只是很多量分因素的一個,一般對于Task 1 來說,141-150字是不會因為字數(shù)原因丟分的。但是!如果你的字數(shù)低于140字就要開始扣分了。同理,在 Task 2中241-250字不會扣分~所以,對于那些差2-3個字到達要求的同學可以放心了。而且,根據(jù)考官打分規(guī)則,雅思寫作打分是扣分原則,也就是錯的越多,分就越低。如果你的寫作單詞以及語法很好,那么確實會提高一定分數(shù)。但是!!!如果你的語法和用詞沒那么好,有錯誤,那么請記住一句話:多說多錯!請保持在150/250字左右,不要寫太多,這樣只會造成更多的“扣分”。那么理想字數(shù)是多少字呢?對于英語水平較高的同學來說,小作文170字,大作文270字是比較合適的字數(shù)。
誤區(qū)2:寫復雜句和分詞結構可以加分
事實:有多少考生會在考前苦心研究句型句式,籌備二十多種句型,定語從句,狀語從句,名詞性從句等等等…然后在考場上千方百計的想把句型套用上去,等待考官的最后檢閱。
以為這樣就會得高分,那大家可就太天真了!要知道雅思寫作的考點并不是語法考試,更不是背誦考試,而是考察考生們對英語這門語言的應用。一篇好的作文應該是水道渠成,渾然天成的,一字一句都應該來自與考生的內(nèi)心。而并非生搬硬套,無中生有。
句子變化是體現(xiàn)一個人的寫作能力,但是如果你的復雜句錯誤,考官會扣分,而不是加分。使用不恰當,譬如說套句,不該用的地方粗暴出現(xiàn),那么也會扣分。
誤區(qū)3:語法不重要
事實:雅思寫作評分標準里對語法的要求也提到了。作為英語的根基,語法水平?jīng)Q定了你作文的基礎分。語法錯誤太多,不僅影響閱讀體驗,甚至會將你的表達,整個內(nèi)容無法準確閱讀,這樣的作文是得不了高分的。想要寫好雅思寫作必需要有過硬的語法基礎,全面了解基礎語法知識,形成英語語法體系。句子結構不對,語法錯誤一多,哪怕是你用多高端的詞,多好的內(nèi)容都是5.5分。道理很簡單,哪怕中文也是。如果通篇白字,寫的句法不通,你用唐詩宋詞,旁征博引,考官也會覺得你連基本的文化都沒有,更不要說水平多高了。
誤區(qū)4:套用范文
事實:說到范文,明明知道這就是一個坑,還是有無數(shù)中國考生,拼死往里跳。還覺得自己沒有錯。首先這些所謂的范文其實并非權威,也不是什么雅思考官總結,都是自己編纂出來的。在雅思考官的眼里并非優(yōu)良作品??忌鷤兗词贡车臐L瓜爛熟,也不過是在背一篇沒有用的文章而已。更何況有的考生只是背了其中的只言片語,然后融合自己寫的一堆病句錯句,寫出來的連自己不看不懂還怎么得高分?也有的考生死記硬背,看見類似的題目就復制的寫下,結果產(chǎn)出一篇文不對題的文章。最后拿到不理想的成績,還傻傻的找不出原因。
這4個致命誤區(qū)也就說到這里了,很短但是是很多考生都改不掉的壞毛病。希望大家看完后能夠針對自己的失分點進行分析。在平時練習中一點一滴的積累,這樣才能速提高寫作。希望上述對你有幫助!
]]>1.a has something in common with b
a于b有共同之處。
2.the difference between a and b lies in…
a與b之間的差別在于…
3…(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in…
…年…急劇上升
4.the table shows the changes in the number of…over the period from…to…
該表格描述了在…年之…年間…數(shù)量的變化。
5.the bar chart illustrates that…
該柱狀圖展示了…
6.the graph provides some interesting data regarding…
該圖為我們提供了有關…有趣數(shù)據(jù)。
7.the diagram shows (that)…
該圖向我們展示了…
8.the pie graph depicts (that)….
該圓形圖揭示了…
9.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of…
這個曲線圖描述了…的趨勢。
10.the figures/statistics show (that)…
數(shù)據(jù)(字)表明…
11.the tree diagram reveals how…
該樹型圖向我們揭示了如何…
12.the data/statistics show (that)…
該數(shù)據(jù)(字)可以這樣理解…
13.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…
這些數(shù)據(jù)資料令我們得出結論…
14.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…
如圖所示…
15.according to the chart/figures…
根據(jù)這些表(數(shù)字)…
16.as is shown in the table…
如表格所示…
17.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in…
從圖中可以看出,…發(fā)生了巨大變化。
18.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that…or it is clear/apparent from the chart that…
從圖表我們可以很清楚(明顯)看到…
19.this is a graph which illustrates…
這個圖表向我們展示了…
20.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from…to…
該表格描述了…年到…年間a與b的比例關系。
21.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in…
該圖以圓形圖形式描述了…總的趨勢。
希望以上內(nèi)容能否對您有些許幫助,如有雅思托福備考相關問題可以在線咨詢環(huán)球雅思老師,看見后第一時間為同學們解答疑問。環(huán)球雅思秉持教育成就未來的理念,專注于為中國學子提供優(yōu)質的出國語言培訓及配套服務。環(huán)球雅思在教學中采用“九步閉環(huán)法”,幫助學生快速提升學習效能,同時提供優(yōu)質的課后服務,跟進學生學習進程,為優(yōu)質教學提供堅強的保障。目前,環(huán)球雅思東莞學校已構建了包含語言培訓、出國咨詢、國際課程、游學考察、在線課程等在內(nèi)的一站式服務教育生態(tài)圈。相關問題可在線免費咨詢,或撥打免費熱線0769-21682008~
]]>今天東莞英凱教育(環(huán)球雅思分校)小編和大家分享雅思寫作真題“保護生態(tài)”解析及7分范文,希望對各位的雅思寫作備考有幫助。
06-01 雙邊討論類大作文社會話題-環(huán)保話題
Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
題目大意:
人類活動對動植物產(chǎn)生負面影響。有人說采取任何措施都為時已晚;而其他人說可以采取措施改變這個情況。雙邊討論并給出你的觀點。
思路:
雙邊討論題目,建議在討論雙邊觀點時,都分析各自的合理性,而不要去寫各自的壞處,最后再給出自己的觀點,即單邊支持一方或中立。
在雙方立場針對同一話題對立時,在論證時盡量對雙方觀點有明確的限定,如甲方的觀點是具體在怎樣的前提下才是合理的,而再其他前提下,則是乙方的觀點有道理。避免因為描述模糊而導致矛盾或觀點的不清晰。
《劍-14》test1 正好有一篇考官范文,涉及同樣的話題,其中個別觀點,可以搬用到這篇文章中。
審題,找出關鍵詞:
toolate to do anything:甲方認為采取任何措施都為時已晚(即在分析甲方這一觀點的合理性時,可以舉出具體的客觀事實或公認的真理,來證明為何沒有辦法)
effective measurescan be taken to improve this situation:乙方認為還可以采取有效措施,彌補問題(論證乙方合理性時,也要提出具體可行的建議,強調其對拯救動植物的有效性)
提綱梳理如下:
范文
It is true that human activities have exerted detrimental effects on plants and animals, with conflicting views on how to curb this trend. While some people regard it too late to tackle this problem, I would agree with the argument that there are still some measures we can do to conserve the environment.
On the one hand, it is easy to understand why some people are pessimistic about the feasibility of solutions.The reasons leading to the desperation is that survival of the fittest has long been rule in the nature for centuries, meaning that it is futile to reverse the trend. The past decades have witnessed various attempts being put forward by many NGOs (non-governmental organizations) with expectation to save endangered species, the sad truth is that they do little help to change the reality on the ground. One compelling example is the death of the last white rhino in this century regardless of the enormous effort and money invested in the conservation project.
However, I support the opponents who believe that it is not time to be desperate, while there are practical measures waiting to be implemented to reverse the trend. At administrative level, the government could initiate laws to restrict the relentless exploitation of natural environment. By doing so, the habitats of a variety of flora and fauna can be preserved, which allows enough living space for wildlife to survive and breed. For individuals, people could stop buying products made from precious animals or plants, whether these be crocodile bags or artefacts made of ivory. Were it not for the demand for such products, the hunting and poaching would be mitigate d to a large extent.
In my opinion, although it is too late to revive the wildlife that have already been extinct, there are still a lot we can do to save other animals and plants at risk.
相關詞匯:
Detrimental 有害的
Curb 遏制
Pessimistic 悲觀的
Futile 徒勞的
Relentless 毫無節(jié)制的
Exploitation 開發(fā)
Flora and fauna 動植物
Habitat 棲息地
Poaching 捕獵
Mitigate 減輕
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]]>同學們在寫作時都想要有個模范標準給自己作為參考,看看雅思滿分作文的句式結構,再看看自己在平時寫作中有哪些不足。有對照才可以有提高嘛!來看下面的雅思滿分作文范文吧!
題目:You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.
考官范文:As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagantlifestyles with huge houses and cars.
Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibilityof governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.
Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform. in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.
Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicatesthat our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.
看完了雅思作文滿分,同學們范文是不是覺得這些句式詞匯自己也都會呢,但是你為什么寫不出來這樣好的文章呢,看來大還是要多加練習吆。只要多下功夫,便一定會有提高的!
以上便是環(huán)球雅思老師為大帶來的雅思滿分作文范文的內(nèi)容。希望大可以仔細的閱讀,如果還想了解更多的有關雅思考的信息,可以點擊頁面的咨詢框,會有專業(yè)的老師為你解答。
希望以上內(nèi)容能夠對正在備考的同學有些許幫助,如有雅思托福備考相關問題可以在線咨詢環(huán)球雅思老師,看見后第一時間為同學們解答疑問。環(huán)球雅思秉持教育成就未來的理念,專注于為中國學子提供優(yōu)質的出國語言培訓及配套服務。環(huán)球雅思在教學中采用“九步閉環(huán)法”,幫助學生快速提升學習效能,同時提供優(yōu)質的課后服務,跟進學生學習進程,為優(yōu)質教學提供堅強的保障。目前,環(huán)球雅思東莞學校已構建了包含語言培訓、出國咨詢、國際課程、游學考察、在線課程等在內(nèi)的一站式服務教育生態(tài)圈。相關問題可在線免費咨詢,或撥打免費熱線0769-21682008~
]]>在雅思聽力考試中,大部分問題都是針對考試的細節(jié),只有掌握文章的細節(jié),才能準確的找到答案。下面是小編給大家分享的雅思聽力備考方法,大家可以作為參考。
詞匯積累
從雅思聽力考試和劍橋雅思聽力考試中可以看出,情景詞匯在雅思聽力中一直處于核心地位,所以情景詞匯也是詞匯積累階段掌握的關鍵。
雅思考試中常見的聽力場景有10個,分為兩類;一個是生活場景,與國外生活密切相關。二是學術場景,主要是學術講座和作業(yè)討論,所以在背單詞的過程中記住這些單詞是關鍵,這是邁向雅思聽力分數(shù)高分的第一步。
題型準備
題型的復雜性和多樣性是雅思聽力考試的一大特點,也是難點之一。雅思聽力考試中常見的題型有六種,除了比較熟悉的填空題、多項選擇題外,還包括配對題、表格題、地圖題等。
如果在考試中你不熟悉這些題型,考生就很難在有限的時間內(nèi)快速準確的做題。因此,在準備雅思聽力考試時,有必要研究和掌握常見題型的特點、解決思路和方法。
練習方法
雅思聽力練習的哪一種方法最有效,一直存在爭議。但結合雅思聽力考試的特點和形式,精聽與泛聽相結合對提高雅思聽力水平還是很有幫助的。
在雅思聽力考試中,大部分問題都是針對考試的細節(jié),考生只有掌握文章的細節(jié),才能準確的找到答案,否則即使你理解了文章的大意也做不到正確的問題。
而精聽是幫助大家提高掌握細節(jié)能力的最直接方法,在精聽練習中,考生需要理解每一個句子、每一個單詞,甚至每一個音節(jié),通過這樣的練習方式,考生可以有效地訓練自己掌握細節(jié)能力。
但是,考生除了掌握細節(jié)之外,還需要全面掌握文章的思路和結構,這樣在預測考點時能夠幫助大家提高效率,從而更好地掌握考點,更具體地聽錄音。
在這方面,泛聽對考生有很大的幫助。在泛聽練習中,考生可以通過掌握整篇文章來理清文章的邏輯和思路。
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