原題如下：

Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20170603

就此題而言，相信大部分考生應(yīng)該選擇否定題干立場的角度來寫。因此，為了激發(fā)大家的思考，下文冒天下之大不韙，完全贊同了題干的觀點(diǎn)。

Millions of people every year from some corners of the world migrate to metropolis in order to share more social resources like better schools for their children and more working opportunities for themselves. Obviously, what those immigrants ignore is threats for their health that they have to face there.

開頭段，背景描述之后，就是直接的點(diǎn)明了筆者立場?！　rimarily, big cities are more likely to suffer from environmental pollution, and hence contaminated living environment in large cities is destroying citizens’ health there. Both polluted underground water system and unbearable air quality cannot guarantee the local to have a safe living environment. Instead, in some relatively undeveloped areas people usually do not need to worry whether they should wear masks all the day or whether the water they drink every day is really drinkable or not. Besides, noise from transport in cities is another significant pollutant plaguing people living there especially at night. It is perceived as needles to prick people’s ears all the night. Living under circumstance like this, people are extremely far away from owning a healthy life.

主段一，從環(huán)境污染方面入手，說明在大城市生活的人們的健康狀況堪憂。

Worse still, living in great tense is ruining health of residents in large cities both physically and mentally. Due to the unbelievably high living cost in big cities, those city dwellers must work hard to earn enough money to support their families. Workplace competition and widespread overtime work might bring employees huge pressure, which without a hitch makes them nervous and anxious day and night. Surviving with so much stress, people will consequently suffer from many kinds of disease like insomnia and high blood pressure. A growing number of mid-age people in cities come down with some illness that only old people could get in the past time, meaning that health conditions there are declining year by year.

第二段，從精神壓力入手，論證了巨大的壓力使得人們的身體健康以及精神健康都在遭受威脅。

Briefly, dangers to health of residents in large cities can be attributed to polluted environment and mental stress bothering people in cities almost every day, despite plenty of convenience and comfort that they can enjoy there. Therefore, health conditions of people living in big cities are definitely under threats.

結(jié)尾段總括全文之后，再次表明了筆者的立場。

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